Surrender? Comments

do more...write more... let the shout of kids be your inspiration to write... Let their noise, sounds like poetic words.... surrender all...to your passion....pour out everything.... wonderful write.... 10++++ Lovelots, Maia

poem is good but not clear to me.plz clear it for me...

It gets to this point I know and what a good solution for now. Keep up the drizzling rhymes as they always seem to drizzle in just the right place for the reader. 10 love Karin

happens to all of us...but sacrifice makes the poem sweeter and soulful, doesn't it? ...nice expression

Oh no! Don't give in, let it go piece by piece to the kids until their stomach are bloated. Another wonderful short piece coming from a woman who is one step beyond.

Another piece to ponder on

You can give in at times but never give up 10 Daniel