Surrender Comments
I heard it repeating,
that voice in my ear,
and wondered once more
if redemption was near.
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An insightful bit of verse in well expressed thoughts and feelings. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
I am always so pleased when poets I admire write such lovely comments..Thank you!
A wonderful poem that captures the reader. Perhaps I need to " Surrender" a little more. Thank You
Thank you Lyn for your kind comments but.only “surrender’ if you have to! Lodigiana x
Overcoming! ! Able to apologise. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A wonderful write that says sorry despite you being right? ....well penned.
Sometimes that’s just how life works...Thank you so much Tom for your lovely comments x
Apology is an act of great courage while forgiveness is even a greater virtue. A poem that combines both is truly sublime. Heartiest Congratulations Lodigiana, once again. Please enjoy the moment........10
You are incredibly kind..thank you Geeta and I am so pleased that you enjoyed it.Lodigiana x
Such a wonderful poem with a smooth flow a nd i would like to read it again and again. 'I bit my lips hard, it brings tears to my eyes, and although I WAS right.. I will apologise! '.. is very interesting. Congrats.
So pleased that you enjoyed this..thank you for reading and your kind comments.
This poem was a delight to read, with rhyme and meter that moved seamlessly throughout, leading to a conclusion that brought a smile. Well done and congratulations for poem of the day..
Thank you so much Harley! I am thrilled that you enjoyed it and that it raised a wry smile! ! lodigiana x
A true entertaining poem, sublimely worded and adorably presented. What surpirsed me is the fact that this poem is a hilarious and a bit sardonic tune. BUT the Song is loveliest, Lodigiana! I have enjoyed very much this crystal clear poem as neverwhere, thinking of all the volcanos exploding, dirty dust comes down and Aussie in fire for months.........A 10 Full Score for the beautiful poem. A well deserved MPOTD. CONGRATULATIONS..
Thank you so much my dear friend, your words are both kind and generous and as always very much appreciated. Thank you Sylvia very much
I bit my lips hard, it brings tears to my eyes, and although I WAS right.. I will apologise! /// beautiful poem penned; I enjoyed
Thank you so much Mahtab Really appreciate your comments. Lodigiana x
A well composed poem of the day. Congrats on your featured piece 👌❤️👏.....10+++
How kind of you Kostas to comment so generously..thank you and I am so pleased you liked it.Lodigiana x
Beautiful poem, well articulated. Thanks for sharing...10. Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH and leave your comments and ratings
Thank you so much for your kind comments much apprciated.Lodigiana x
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7/20/2025 12:56:20 PM # 1.0.0
I was in your neighbourhood Lodigiana just revisiting some great poems and again found this one. It wasn't that hard to rediscover for it like all your poetry shines day and night. And oh so brightly! Five stars and again most worthy of each. I wish you well and the loved ones around you. Shaun.x.