Two Niggers, talking to a Jew,
An Asian man listening in.
Dance the hate.
Feel the verb.
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This is a bold statement and I think a great write...reminds me of my poem we all bleed the same colour blood dont we...I was reading a friends post on what you wrote...this is just great...fantastic.
'Dear Lord, make us see that when we bleed, it is always red, regardless of our intentions.' _________________ You brought to life the views of Gandhiji.....a provocative write indeed! ..
'Dear Lord, make us see that when we bleed, it is always red, regardless of our intentions.'.......... ________________ You brought to life the views of Gandhiji... a lovely, provocative write indeed!
as the tool served the innocent intention, a blaze to ash the stinking racism, blessed be this soul, who might mount heights of ecstasy sure in future near; not a prediction, but a mortal's premonition. God Bless. Inspiring, is the single word conclusion, a need of the hour too, it seems.
Wonderful message...! The poem concludes with an epigrammatic three lines that say it all.... I love the whole poem!
So original, with a hard hitting message that unfolds with powerful imagery of the terrible curse of racism, we are all equal! ! Excellent write! !
A poem that is very concrete in images and very nourishing in thoughts sir
A beautiful write on reality and the fact that man is still not color blind. We seem to, with this reality, find recourse in prayer. I am so glad that you pointed out this reality in your community. You are not alone, Chris.
A thought provoking poem, sadly we will never get rid of the hate. A great write.
Very insightful poem. Hadn't heard the word groovy in a century and a half man.
Message is outstanding, poem is amazing, thoughts are touching, And the poet of living conscience is conveying but very few are listening. Even if they are listening, they are not acting, What is wrong, who is wrong, where; s wrong, I know nothing.
An excellent pen! And far more indeed how excellent it is as an exposé of the core of mankind's greatest folly... hatred by virtue of difference... Touché, Sir!
The foundation of all hatred is prejudice....it can be our color or weight, or how tall you are, or how poor....and on and on....sad but that is part of human race.....Terrible.....
I just earlier today commented on another poet's write by saying that within the grand spectrum of hues, we indeed all bleed red. Then, stumbled across your stark and stirring piece and found your last lines spun from a common thread. PEACE
Ah wow thoughtprovokin poem penned in awesome unique style against hate n racism. The punchline is adorably touching impressive. Yes Hate shudnt be there. Tnx n did i read u before?
Powerful! This is a crazy world! I choose to change channels!