Tuesday, May 6, 2014

Surrealistic Sunsets And Groovy Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.9

Two Niggers, talking to a Jew,
An Asian man listening in.
Dance the hate.
Feel the verb.
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Chris G. Vaillancourt
COMMENTS
Chuy Amante 27 May 2014

Powerful! This is a crazy world! I choose to change channels!

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Kaila George 12 May 2014

This is a bold statement and I think a great write...reminds me of my poem we all bleed the same colour blood dont we...I was reading a friends post on what you wrote...this is just great...fantastic.

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Yash Shinde 12 May 2014

'Dear Lord, make us see that when we bleed, it is always red, regardless of our intentions.' _________________ You brought to life the views of Gandhiji.....a provocative write indeed! ..

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Yash Shinde 12 May 2014

'Dear Lord, make us see that when we bleed, it is always red, regardless of our intentions.'.......... ________________ You brought to life the views of Gandhiji... a lovely, provocative write indeed!

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Tajudeen Shah 10 May 2014

as the tool served the innocent intention, a blaze to ash the stinking racism, blessed be this soul, who might mount heights of ecstasy sure in future near; not a prediction, but a mortal's premonition. God Bless. Inspiring, is the single word conclusion, a need of the hour too, it seems.

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Valsa George 09 May 2014

Wonderful message...! The poem concludes with an epigrammatic three lines that say it all.... I love the whole poem!

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Hazel Durham 09 May 2014

So original, with a hard hitting message that unfolds with powerful imagery of the terrible curse of racism, we are all equal! ! Excellent write! !

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Dinesan Madathil 09 May 2014

A poem that is very concrete in images and very nourishing in thoughts sir

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Paul Sebastian 09 May 2014

A beautiful write on reality and the fact that man is still not color blind. We seem to, with this reality, find recourse in prayer. I am so glad that you pointed out this reality in your community. You are not alone, Chris.

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Neela Nath Das 07 May 2014

A fantastic write against racism.And the style is wonderful.

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Dave Walker 07 May 2014

A thought provoking poem, sadly we will never get rid of the hate. A great write.

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Juan Olivarez 07 May 2014

Very insightful poem. Hadn't heard the word groovy in a century and a half man.

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Akhtar Jawad 07 May 2014

Message is outstanding, poem is amazing, thoughts are touching, And the poet of living conscience is conveying but very few are listening. Even if they are listening, they are not acting, What is wrong, who is wrong, where; s wrong, I know nothing.

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Anthony Burkett 07 May 2014

An excellent pen! And far more indeed how excellent it is as an exposé of the core of mankind's greatest folly... hatred by virtue of difference... Touché, Sir!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 07 May 2014

a terrible truth penned brilliantly!

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Poetheart Morgan 06 May 2014

The foundation of all hatred is prejudice....it can be our color or weight, or how tall you are, or how poor....and on and on....sad but that is part of human race.....Terrible.....

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Susan Lacovara 06 May 2014

I just earlier today commented on another poet's write by saying that within the grand spectrum of hues, we indeed all bleed red. Then, stumbled across your stark and stirring piece and found your last lines spun from a common thread. PEACE

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 06 May 2014

Ah wow thoughtprovokin poem penned in awesome unique style against hate n racism. The punchline is adorably touching impressive. Yes Hate shudnt be there. Tnx n did i read u before?

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