Thursday, May 29, 2008

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Stacked on grocery shelves – kids view
Hallucinatory quality of a milk dream
Oddly shaped sizes floating in the bowl
Don’t want the breakfast of champions –
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Robert Sheridan
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Sadiqullah Khan 30 May 2008

the last stanza is thought provoking, , , expressed lightly and well, , , ,

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Abha Sharma 29 May 2008

your lines present the modern picture where we fear of losing what we possessed coz of the changing values and attitudes, you have intelligibly connected it to this post modern literary trend, I liked the pun in the word Dadaism …I agree that the materialistic life is not giving enough room for our own selves… Nicely penned, Abha

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