Sunday, December 25, 2011

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On a Night dark and lonely
Possessed by fierce demons only,
Appeared a gem on heavens door.
So I saw and stopped, and stopped and saw;
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okoye charles
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Pheko Motaung 10 March 2012

Now this poem is breath taking and fabulous and majestic! I take off my hat to you.Only you can come up with a true masterpiece like this great poem.Congratulations and well done to you.

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Kelly Passion 07 March 2012

I greet thee my dear You are powerful...........Silent Listener

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Kevin Patrick 04 March 2012

This possesed me into a dream that was epic and great. I have to reread it again to get passed the images you create, for the story underneath. This is a lovely work

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Eric Cockrell 02 March 2012

even on the darkest night there is a candle! great poem!

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Ye Caterpillar 25 February 2012

Of straynge and half-forgotten gothick mysteries broodeth the mind, turning words sweetly upon the tongue. And as those bitter waters run and trickle through that sleeping land, that land of sleeping dreams, so stirreth the poet's soul, putting firey words to parchment crisp... A beautifuly crafted work, Okoye, reminding me of some of the New England writers of the nineteenth century. Such masters as the great Poe, Hawthorn or Melville. This is the first of your poems I've read, and I am seriously impressed. I hope you will produce plenty more like this, and thanks for making contact.

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Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) 24 February 2012

wow...its good..n touching too..

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Liliana Roman 24 February 2012

wow. that was alot. once again from the heart.

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