Thursday, July 2, 2015

Surprises Comments

Rating: 3.7

Surprises surprise us
They seem to come from nowhere
They lie hidden in some corner
Come all of a sudden
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Bharati Nayak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2018

Surprises surprise us They seem to come from nowhere They lie hidden in some corner Come all of a sudden To catch us unawares They give us so many moments of pleasure Speaking the words of love and springing from a true heart.....so touching and impressive with true vision. Beautiful poem.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 September 2017

Merge into one! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Manonton Dalan 15 January 2016

soar-prize that could be... makes us happy or sad.

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Denis Mair 11 September 2015

Thanks for guiding my imagination to picture many-colored surprises coming together- no longer intermittent- to become a state of constant wonder.

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Bharati Nayak 24 July 2015

Life is really full of surprises. It surprises me how this humble poem can touch the hearts of great poets

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Tony Adah 24 July 2015

The surprise of this poem makes me surprise! well penned and more creative endeavors!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 July 2015

Surprises always surprise a person and brings shock to horror, tears, muse and joy etc. Very nicely and aptly composed. Enjoyed with surprise. Thanks for sharing........10

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Valsa George 04 July 2015

Sometimes surprises come to us to excite us, to shock us to horror, to move us into tears or to make us jump with joy! ! Whatever it be, a surprise is always a surprise and can produce in us a flurry of emotions! Great theme and great write Bharati!

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Bharati Nayak 04 July 2015

Thank you so much.It is wonderful to read your comments.

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Sekharan Pookkat 02 July 2015

We enjoy surprises if it is a long cherished one When it came stealthily from behind Putting hands on my eyes, asked tell me who am I, who am I? beautiful penning

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Bharati Nayak 02 July 2015

For all the valuable opinions I am so thankful.

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Jaishree Nair 02 July 2015

A unique theme that took me by surprise .Enjoyed the flow. Thanks

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Bharati Nayak 02 July 2015

It is so nice to read your lovely comment.Thank you so much.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 02 July 2015

Truly, surprises come suddenly from nowhere and surprise us with its immense pleasure or disapproval.Loved reading your poem.

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Bharati Nayak 04 July 2015

Thank you for your nice comments.

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