Tuesday, August 4, 2009

Surprise Comments

Rating: 5.0

While climbing a tall mountain
Short of breath as expected
Desperately trying to reach the top
I lost my sense of direction
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Romeo Della Valle
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Marva Seaton 21 August 2011

Hi Romeo I really like this poem and the story it is telling. Good writing skills, will try to read more of your poems.

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rago rago 11 August 2009

it is life.let theangel guide always..........

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 August 2009

The God has sent you an Angel, in a form that you'd always want.Sometimes, our journey in life is not as beautiful as we could have wished, but we can always dream on, till the reality bites.A pleasure to read yours Romeo.

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Graham Russell 09 August 2009

whay can i say your poem was so breath taking.... thank you for sharing.

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Surya . 09 August 2009

wonderful poem.wonderful lines. voted10 surya

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dr veenaa rai 06 August 2009

guiding angel, the love of your life...even in her death, she guides you...true love indeed...

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Romeo Della Valle

Romeo Della Valle

Dominican Republic
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