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Very often we have wrong perceptions about people and we tend to become unnecessarily suspicious of human nature.But some incidents created by the Almighty help us do away with these feelings.The poem is a very good reflection of how we transform our beliefs about an individual towards better.Briefly expressed but excellent. To me friend is someone who may not join you at your good times, but will extend a rock-solid support during your bad times, who may not speak a single good word in front of you but always tell good things behind your back, who will maintain hundred percent confidentialityity with you for the shared secrets for ever and above all who will want to continue friendship without any expectations from you. But I am a bit skeptical, at this age, is there any such friend? Or even if he/she is there do we value him/her?

Very nice poem...id love reading it! ! !

from the keen lady of truth...I liked this line a lot... friendship is learning to love a person with all his facets....learning to continue to be friends...is adjusting to differences and seeing the spice of life together.....

ah! what a slanty, sane and soulful view of life.... keep wriitng my child

Love you for your poems my dear poet! ! ! Love you for your truth & innocense in thought! ! ! Go ahead....

This makes me long to read more from you poetic treasure trove. Our heavenly friends are truly inspiring aren´t they? Thankks for sharing your treasured truth with is. Huhaha from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd

wow a nice poem from a keen lady of truth anjali

beautiful poem Lui..we have always to seek the truth...you expressed your feeling so well..

You express deep ideas through a unique usage of language in your poetry. Thanks for sharing.Best wishes to you. A.

i do not know how to describe it but i love it all of us are like 2 side of a coin gd n bad in all it is for those who know us best to know which is which

A unique style, a profound theme and a lovely poem. We start our relations with mutual fear but if we approach them with a positive frame of mind they turn heavely. So is friendship. CP

you style is unique....i found it interresting to read you poem...good job and keep writing.

I like the chosen rymes you use in this poem. Its easy to remember especially for high school students presentation.! 0+++. Please if you have time, can I ask favor too? read my poem and do honest rating and comments to make me feel at ease and become like you soon. thanks much

great write..the theme is a bit of twitch and glitch of presentation in poetic craftmanship..well done..

Everyone commits mistakes but very few have the courage to correct it. Wish you will be in those few. Nice write.

hi luwi....to be honest let me say first that the overall poem sounds great....but i feel a foot note is needed as the context is a bit obscure...one can only make wild guesses and i d rather go along with bindu vidya....in the analysis but nice lines cheers

It is interesting the twist. Many times, we discover how shallow we can be in our judgements. Good work, Luwi.

A well written poem, it good to write about what we feel, all poets of this world should unite in friendship.

nicely said, i like it...

It's those life changing moments that make the best inspiration. Lovely poem.