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Very good expressive writing as always, David.... hope you are well friend... don't stop writing :)

'I had been hurting all day, as if some days are meant for that. Saddened by a weird feeling that only Sunday can give.' This stanza stood out for me in a fine poem about personal loss and the most hideous of all surprises. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

the pain and its objections...how real they proved! i love the way you present your feelings, David...excellent...to say in brief 10

Love burns the soul. Brilliant poem

Excellent David, we associate places with people and the fact she was in your favourite restaurant meant something, shame she was with another man! It was never meant to be, but your experience has led to this poem, thanks, 10 Lynda xx

Ouch Ouch Ouch! My commiserations to you David! What bad timing huh? At least you now know! Hug from Tai