Friday, October 12, 2012

Surplus Heart Of Wine... By (Mimi Mata Meyer) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I will not cry tonight,
I do not want to gather in the rain,
Then shrivel beneath the sun...
I am tired of these things,
...
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Ray Quesada 17 October 2012

Bring me the seasoned grape of your being, And your surplus heart of wine - I'm sitting here pulling my hair at reading these words..(wish I WROTE THEM!) .they are just sweet and romantic...i give it a 10 10 10 10 10, all the way..-.are you SURE you havn't been reading Neruda, by the way? *wink wink* - seriously, your words are like a reincarnation of his, and yet completely your own - very fresh.

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