Thursday, March 6, 2008

. Surface Expressions Comments

Rating: 3.5

If I should greet you with a grin
It hardly expresses all that’s within
If I should extend an open hand
It barely tells you where we stand
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Mary Havran
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Ann Beard 19 March 2008

A Lovely poem. we never really know someone but this can be because they dont really know themselves. I know I am a mystery to myself. I greatly admire your skill. Regards Ann

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nothing over 17 March 2008

This is grizzly man, I just changed my name. I can really relate to this poem and about our decisions to trust or not trust another person. It is a risk we all have to take to give another person our fragile hearts knowing that they will break if they are dropped. This poem expresses these emotions so very well. You are also a very good wordsmith yourself.

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Andrew Basore 11 March 2008

Insperational. I loved it

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The structure and flow of this make for a quick reading, and only afterwards is the depth of meaning absorbed... a wonderful piece. t x

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Alison Cassidy 07 March 2008

Oh, the masks we all wear from time to time. Your poem expresses truth about what is and what seems to be. And you express it eloquently and compassionately. Great poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Anita Atina 06 March 2008

So true, we all wear masks. Lovely poem Cheers Anita

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