Surf In My Eyes Comments

A wonderful poem. Such zest.

This poem, as I comprehend, is an invitation of 'love' from somebody which she loves. The dream lover should be able to share the joys and sorrows of life. You have meticulously put this idea into your thought-provoking lines...wonderful.....

your a great poet wrote so many nice poem

Hi Rini, Beautiful poem. : : Dive into the ocean of my eyes and surf into my life: : - An overt invitation into one's life. To share the life. Float into my dreams and look into the world from my side: : This is very important. To look at the life through one's angle is a very difficult task. But that is the way to understand one's point of view; one's approach to life: Capture the views of my sight There is nothing much I have to hide You will see the truth of life Very purposed, pointed write. Asking the reader to ponder; too see listen the version of story of the person on the other side of the fence. Love needs to be unconditional. For this, complete acceptance of the counter party is required. Very nice. Thank you Rini for sharing this lovely poem. A 100++

You have beautiful eyes and more beautiful vision. Thanks Rini for the poem shared. 10++

A little poem of 12 lines echoes vibrant ocean of your eyes..a brilliant piece of work Rini, Loved it

This is a very thought invoking and enjoyable poem about surf in my eyes.