Who would have thought that I deserved a bit of heaven?
The angels must be smiling at what had just happened.
My heart is thrilled at the thought of your existence;
The butterflies in my stomach are fluttering without pretense.
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A very good poem. And the first line sounds as a classic aphorism.
Still lovin and gettin stronger n stronger.Good ridden poem Rage! !
this was so lovely to read it brought back a memory of how a chance meeting can turn your whole perspective on life on it's head, over and it heals. Who would have thought it possible? God only knows, smiling at you, TAi
surely you are falling.... very hearfelt write..written from heart to touch one's heart... .full of hope and love.... very humble...your thoughts are superb wonderful words, beautifully crafted to form into a beautiful poem your piece clearly pictures a man longing for her love... 10+++
As if I am reading a diary or a love letter...so heartfelt penned vividly that your thoughts are so expressive....10
Sounds like love to me Rage... Andy 10