Wednesday, May 5, 2010

Surely Comments

Rating: 5.0

In her aura she spoke to me words of love,
Undoing every passion she keyed to glove,
Each unnerved lie she caught like a pack of flies,
While I fumed apologized she heard my cries;
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Jai K Garg
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 June 2010

‘True love in life is our beauty to connect.’ Yea Ho-ho-ho to it… Sound diction…and un-fragile emotion… 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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