Sure To Be Unsure! Comments

A woman is a mother, if a woman is not regarded the entire humanity is not regraded. A nice write.

In our Indian culture woman is worshipped as Godess of learning wealth wisdom power strength inspiration and so on. That family is only happy where woman is regarded.Then how can she be so poor rather she can make what she likes even can change the direction of wind. Now i request you to write just oppodite. Rest i agree with Tribhawanji. Regards.

Poignant through and through. If ' she was forced to travel through the same path again and again should we blame it on her karma in this life itself. A touching read.

Today, she will accept anything with Smiles only a portrait of her submission to what's preordained.

Everything is predestined but one has to carry on to the last like a brave soldier........Geetha.....very well crafted.....

A painful confession of a lady's helplessness of her repeated blows what she received. But an unconditional surrender to a crime is another form of death. Please come up and fight it brave.

Geetha, this is a stunning write! But there is a tone of cold resignation which is not in keeping with the persona you are trying to present! It is probable that the slings of life have changed her.... but still.....! ! Happy to see you back! Conquer new heights! !

Quite long, but worth the read.Thanks.

Geetha, you certainly have your way with words. However, the best of the poems use minimal words to express what they want to. I am giving you an exercise. Can you cut this poem to half its length and still say everything that you want to? Here's grammatical analysis: Hope this helps She has to pay for her karma in this life time itself,

Once her heart was strong enough to deal with any blows..... nice line surrender to fate it is not late accept what is available and on hand they only will be your accomplice and good friends

The footnote notwithstanding, the way this sad tale is woven in poetic poignancy is something to be marvel at...a stunning write. Happy reading and writing. :)

, , , , a sad write, , , that is too much of a pain, , , ,

I hope the hapless woman will get out of this phase soon. A poem that is very straight in expression. Glad to see you back. Be writing at the same pace..

Once again trusted arrow pierced her heart so deep That is a big blow making it difficult to recover. Poem shows the realities faced with clarity and detail.