Why must your love be bittersweet?
Warm and wonderful as May,
Then cool and indifferent,
Changing day to day,
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I love this...... need your constancy...... is it not the inconstant which makes us yearn more..... and then when we want constancy and get it.... do we still want it? It's a quandary! I do like your style here though - Humber Girl x
Vallerie, great poem, ... and somewhat 'bittersweet.' Beautifully written with overtones of sadness. Well done! ! Brian
a brilliant poem! ... i like the straightforward tone of the poem... love... asma...