Monday, June 20, 2016

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Her name came up today…
That Lady down by the Bay.

Wonder what could have been;
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Bill Galvin
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Terry Craddock 20 June 2016

'Her name came up today… That Lady down by the Bay.' loved the mystery introduced in this beginning two line stanza, 'Wind filled our sails, but it was only a gust; I didn't see that the waters were shallow. The pastures looked green, but soon turned to dust, And now the untilled fields all lie fallow.' loved this stanza even more, well penned Bill

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Bill Galvin 21 June 2016

Thank you, Terry. Much appreciated.

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