Sunday, September 30, 2012

Supplication Comments

Rating: 5.0

Darkness descends
And the destination lying far behind
God! This supplication I do make
Give me Light, clear brilliant light!
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 July 2019

Give me Light! Oh Lord! Clear brilliant Light, Not to enjoy the wayside scenes But that I shall not stumble and fall........touching expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem.10

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Shahzia Batool 09 May 2013

I say Ameen to all especially this one: I await The peace to dawn upon In a world where violence rules Where hate like worms eat into the core And the air rent with fears - illusory and real... The prayer is read the way it is written... heart-felt! ! ! Thanks for writing and sharing, a collective prayer is granted soon! ! !

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 22 October 2012

Kudos 4 a sublime poetic supplication to God. Creative of u. Esp admird d 'wolf in sheep clothing line.

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 13 October 2012

briiliant......so well woven from heart.......great! ! ! !

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Spiritual Seeker 11 October 2012

What a beautiful prayer.....to the Lord Most Wise! A big 10.

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Walterrean Salley 05 October 2012

Understanding that we as frail humans are insufficient, and having faith in a wisdom and power greater than self; the power of God. A beautiful prayer.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 04 October 2012

Light to see the truth and obtain the peace! beautiful idea! composed rhythmically!

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Anita Sehgal 04 October 2012

Modern day Prayers... very apt... prayers too need to change with the times..

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Neela Nath Das 03 October 2012

Very nice Maam. Your style of write is always unique.

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Heather Wilson 02 October 2012

A beautiful prayer, it crept into my heart, thank you.

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Valerie Dohren 01 October 2012

Beautiful write Valsa, love the closing stanza.

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