Open a secret door
For my feet ache
Bogged in the marsh
You have the answer
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A person needs to go for endless corrections and editing till he/she exists in this sofisticateed world. O God, guide me before another misstep...wonderful poetry!
You have the answer to the voice of pain! Yes, if one is ready to submit and confess his unavoidable mistake. Life never runs in straight track...it passess through curves and bends!
Before another misstep...... significant.....thanks for sharing..
Nosheen the last few lines are wonderful