Saturday, June 4, 2022

Supplication Comments

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Open a secret door
For my feet ache
Bogged in the marsh
You have the answer
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Nosheen Irfan
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 04 May 2023

Nosheen the last few lines are wonderful

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 May 2023

A person needs to go for endless corrections and editing till he/she exists in this sofisticateed world. O God, guide me before another misstep...wonderful poetry!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 May 2023

You have the answer to the voice of pain! Yes, if one is ready to submit and confess his unavoidable mistake. Life never runs in straight track...it passess through curves and bends!

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Anjandev Roy 03 May 2023

Before another misstep...... significant.....thanks for sharing..

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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