Monday, September 29, 2008

Supplicant Arms Comments

Rating: 5.0

Freckled arms
long and lean
soft and supple
Wiping crumbs from messy tables,
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Callie Carroll
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Ray Schreiber 25 October 2009

In a life of quick showers your poem reminds me of what I'm missing thanks for a relaxing read...

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Bill Thomas 17 January 2009

'beseechingly buoyant...' beautiful! That second stanza takes an already well-seen & well-described poem into the next division up: you craft your work well, Callie, and give the rest of us a standard to aim for. Thank you.

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Francesca Martin 12 October 2008

simply soothing... well stated, accessible, and inserts you into the scene. thanks for the great read!

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Jessica Rosalie Smith 02 October 2008

WOW...This poem is absolutely amazing. I LOVE it... good job Callista =)

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