Freckled arms
long and lean
soft and supple
Wiping crumbs from messy tables,
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'beseechingly buoyant...' beautiful! That second stanza takes an already well-seen & well-described poem into the next division up: you craft your work well, Callie, and give the rest of us a standard to aim for. Thank you.
simply soothing... well stated, accessible, and inserts you into the scene. thanks for the great read!
WOW...This poem is absolutely amazing. I LOVE it... good job Callista =)
In a life of quick showers your poem reminds me of what I'm missing thanks for a relaxing read...