Thursday, November 12, 2020

Supplement And Compliment -♥ Comments

Rating: 5.0

You reside in my breath like:
Moon among the stars
Waves in sea
Wind passing leaves
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M. Asim Nehal
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Mihaela Pirjol 15 November 2020

Sublime poetry on duality! How else can we 'see'?

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Gordon Walter 12 November 2020

X c lent poem.....5***

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 November 2020

Tongue among teeth! ! ! Feet able to move! To meet the beauty of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 November 2020

Supplement And Compliment -♥ Impressive poem, Must it be complement, no? Loveliest poem in reducing lines, keen metaphors in the poem. Very impressing. A 10***** for the Beauty!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 November 2020

Among the stars moon swings in sea waves and you have beautifully captured the scene. This poem is very interesting and amazing...5 stars..

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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