Supplement And Compliment -♥ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Supplement And Compliment -♥

Rating: 5.0


You reside in my breath like:
Moon among the stars
Waves in sea
Wind passing leaves
birds flying across the mountains

And I get accommodated in your arms like:
Fishes in river
Flowers with thorns
Tongue among teeth

And we both complement each other's like:
Earth and Sky
Sand and deserts

And our life is
A soul in two bodies

Only You and Me….

Thursday, November 12, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Reducing lines5,4,3,2,1....
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 15 November 2020

Sublime poetry on duality! How else can we 'see'?

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Gordon Walter 12 November 2020

X c lent poem.....5***

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 November 2020

Tongue among teeth! ! ! Feet able to move! To meet the beauty of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 November 2020

Supplement And Compliment -♥ Impressive poem, Must it be complement, no? Loveliest poem in reducing lines, keen metaphors in the poem. Very impressing. A 10***** for the Beauty!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 November 2020

Among the stars moon swings in sea waves and you have beautifully captured the scene. This poem is very interesting and amazing...5 stars..

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