Behind the clouded streams
Of mascara and distancing dreams,
She barricades her soul,
And slips like static into the whole.
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The rhythm of this poem is super amazing, fantastic, and great. I mumbled it outloud and it just floooows! I love the imagery. Wonderful.
This is a 'super' poem. I like at the end how she dives into the shadows. It leaves room for an afterthoght. Good job.
Truly amazing, it just flows so smoothly