Saturday, April 18, 2009

Superwoman Becomes Mediocrematron Comments

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Behind the clouded streams
Of mascara and distancing dreams,
She barricades her soul,
And slips like static into the whole.
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Alyssa Long
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Sam Fitts 03 May 2009

Truly amazing, it just flows so smoothly

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Rylan Ollivier 28 April 2009

You are great with description! keep it up.

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Catina Crum 22 April 2009

The rhythm of this poem is super amazing, fantastic, and great. I mumbled it outloud and it just floooows! I love the imagery. Wonderful.

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Kilee Burton 20 April 2009

This is a 'super' poem. I like at the end how she dives into the shadows. It leaves room for an afterthoght. Good job.

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