Wednesday, January 30, 2019

Superstitions - Bucolic Verse Comments

Rating: 4.5

These carefree spirits,
thrive on the weak minds
Who falls prey to superstition,
they believe in.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Akhtar Jawad 30 January 2019

These carefree spirits, thrive on the weak minds Do not follow them blindly, Into a tunnel which has no lights...........Powerful start with a powerful concluding message. A nice poem to read.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 January 2019

Many times innocent people easily get trapped by such pretentious people! Well said...An insightful piece of work my friend...10

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M. Asim Nehal

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