A pound in the slot and out comes the chain,
It's Saturday supermarket shopping again,
And so I've obtained my large wire trolley,
And when shopping, you certainly need loads of lolly!
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Mackeral for me, cracked pepper and fresh from the SUPERMARKET. Loads of fun and wonderful observation, well done, you really are a star, Love Duncan
Ernestine, Well done. The reader can tell a lot of preparation went into this poem. lol And yes, I have tried (squid, that is) . Shannon
I shall remember this poem when I venture out on Saturday in the direction of Sainsbury's. I like it because it satirises the vast choice of goods we have and the plethora of special offers etc. The rhyming couples give over the hustle bustle feel you get in supermarkets. I couldn't help but laugh aloud.
The thing I love most about your poetry is the way you write about everyday things like this. We all go grocery shopping but it takes a real skill to put such a task to a poem. Well done. Sincerely, Mary
Good 👍👌poem nice job