Tuesday, April 12, 2022

Superhuman Child Comments

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I was in hospital watching
As the good doctors were saving
Jumping and shouting: that's my bone marrow
So I could see my brothers tomorrow
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Richard Wlodarski
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 13 April 2022

this iswhy I believe in a higher power in children Bravo!

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Richard Wlodarski 13 April 2022

Most definitely, LeeAnn! Gerard Kerouac was perhaps the best example of that in this century. And look at the influence that he had on Jack!

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That was wonderful and inspiring

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Richard Wlodarski 13 April 2022

It was such a great pleasure to write this poem from my heart because the child had inspired mine inner child.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 April 2022

Very inspiring and touching write.

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Richard Wlodarski 13 April 2022

Rose Marie, when I read this poem in public, I pretend to be that child. And immerse myself in my inner child. Great responses. Thx so much!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 April 2022

A wonderful and one of a kind story of kindness by a boy of such tender age woven and crafted in a fascinating poem.

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Richard Wlodarski 13 April 2022

It restores one's faith in humanity and in God. Rose Marie, thank you for believing it to be a fascinating poem.

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Richard Wlodarski 13 April 2022

Such maturity and love at such a young age is the upbringing of good moral parents. I was very deeply moved by this child's totally loving motives.

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