Sunday, April 26, 2009

Superficial Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

I always tried to be perfect.
Trying to make everybody happy, trying to be the best.
But I always ended up unsatisfied.
I started getting angry.
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Hebert Logerie Sr. 20 May 2009

Wonderful! I just hope that it is only a poem, not really a reflection on how you really feel.

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Dylan Taylor 20 May 2009

This is one of the best poems i have ever read. This is exactly how i feel and what happens to me.10 10 10 10 is all i can say.

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~EmmaLeigh~ Smith 04 May 2009

you are so very real, and such a wonderful writer. I think maybe being so young is what gives you the ability to be so honest, and so real. you keep on writing girl.

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