Sunday, July 4, 2010

Superfical Beauty Comments

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In the heat of a summer’s night,
Sweat clinging to her skin,
Hair pasted upon her back
She paints her nails.
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Samantha Samis
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Dr Antony Theodore 29 July 2010

At the end of the poem you bring in the point. see the beauty in her own self. physical beauty is only skin deep. this is a great realization in life. the real beauty is in the ability to love in selfless ways without the pangs of a destructive ego.. thank u for bringing in such a wonderful point through ur poem. thank u again

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 July 2010

At the end of the poem you bring in the point. see the beauty in her own self. physical beauty is only skin deep. this is a great realization in life. the real beauty is in the ability to love in selfless ways without the pangs of a destructive ego.. thank u for bringing in such a wonderful point through ur poem. thank u again

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Kudakwashe Roak Mutama 10 July 2010

this poem has a sense of hurt in it but i agree with my fellow poets that noone is ugly coz there will be always something that will make pple different and you will always find something to like about yourself or about someone so i think the problem with the lady in this poem is that she can not find anything beautiful ion herself.... the style in this poem is very unique and i liked the way you structured your poem... keep it up! ! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 07 July 2010

Nobody is ugly...Thanks to God for creating us normal and healthy...the beauty come when u start to believe yourself, the beauty of your inside glow your outer beauty... People can judge but not meaning they are true...sometimes people confuse either purple or blue, whatever u do let it be true then beauty and love always with you.... there is no word for perfection...it just a creation...The only perfect is only God... Take care believe in yourself

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Kial Whitmire 05 July 2010

I find women to be one of the most beautiful creations on earth, the night cannot be warm without them and stars can be found in their eyes. It's hard for one to find there own beauty but others will. Keep looking and you will see why others stair at you the way they do.

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Beauty is only skin deep. So many wear there painted masks, not true to who they really are. Real beauty comes within. You portrayed this so well in your poem! Media pressure is a key factor of woman looking more at there outward appearance rather than drawing on the inner beauty. Wonderfully scribed! : D

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