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I am pliant PLUCIRE ever hot,
Concord Corncob eternally so
An organic sun-shining ingot
Open ended, a bottle to grow.
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Paul Marusin
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Chinedu Dike 26 September 2014

This poem is written in high level language. I had to read it several times in other to get the picture. The rhyme pattern is very good. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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