Super Moon Comments
Tonight, everybody is busy in watching
The golden moon, the Super Moon.
Supposedly, the last visible super moon
Of this year, will tonight be in full bloom.
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Thank you for reading the poem, @Gary H, and leaving a kind comment.
Nicely crafted. Metaphorically comparing your love to the moon and making her your 'super moon' is amazing. Ignoring the hype from friends and keeping her secretely in your bed is visible in how you have hidden the last two lines. Short but very romantic.....well done!
@Abekah Emmanuel Your kind and generous appreciation of the poem has inspired me a lot. Thank you Abekah.
I am glad you read the poem with attention. And thank you for the comment, Darla.
So romantic you are! It's nice to compare your beloved with moon.
Thank you @Neela Nath Das, my beloved is truly beautiful like a moon.
Beautiful..why need the far moon once moon is near at heart distance..lovely 10
Thank you, dear poet @Aftab Alam Khursheed, for your appreciative comment on the poem and its generous rating. So sorry that I couldn't acknowledge your generosity during your lifetime, but anyway, I owe this to you. May you hear my acknowledging heart and may Allah rest your pious and poetic soul in peace!
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8/7/2025 11:10:44 PM # 1.0.0
Very nice poem. I guess she, the angel, is your grand daughter. Its an excellent poem and very nice to read.