Sunday, November 8, 2009

Sunsilk Dreams Comments

Rating: 3.2

The horizon seems far in its formation
Yet with fond hopes of sun meets sea
I sit on the beach of silky dreams
Your head on my lap as I stroke
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mandara pookal
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Kesav Easwaran 23 December 2009

sun on the lap of sea...must be giving a wonderful feeling of no-horizon...good work...10

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Maren Louise 09 November 2009

This poem melted me into sensual bliss. Wow!

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