Tuesday, April 7, 2009

Sunshine Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's the sun
just behind that cloud
I haven't seen it today
but, I know its there.
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Jim French
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I particularly enjoyed the fourth stanza and all the wonderful imagery in the rest of the poem. The sun certainly rules our life. In Australia I would say 'the rain waits behind he sun. sigh. Easy to read with a great flow Jim. Top marks.

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Joseph Poewhit 07 April 2009

As long as the sun rises we are - OK.

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Billie Baldwin 07 April 2009

Greeting! The sun is the spark of a poet that you just wrote! blessing!

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