The sun shone down through the window—
I thought I saw you there.
But it was just a memory
The light put out with care.
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Dreamy beautiful memories are in your poetry and I love the 'space' it puts me in where I feel yesterday was there forever. Karin Anderson
Charming and delightful. One minor thing: I would transfer 'the' from the end of line 3 to the beginning of line 4.
Sounds like the most lovely song! but makes it's own music...sweet!