Thursday, April 16, 2009

Sunshine One Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun shone down through the window—
I thought I saw you there.
But it was just a memory
The light put out with care.
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Paige Scott
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Patti Masterman 05 July 2009

Sounds like the most lovely song! but makes it's own music...sweet!

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Dreamy beautiful memories are in your poetry and I love the 'space' it puts me in where I feel yesterday was there forever. Karin Anderson

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Rory Hudson 21 April 2009

Charming and delightful. One minor thing: I would transfer 'the' from the end of line 3 to the beginning of line 4.

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