Thursday, September 24, 2009

Sunshine Hue Comments

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Sunshine hue, sunshine grew
Shines its rays on me and you
Sunshine light sunshine bright
Not a dark cloud close in sight
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Char Pattrick
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Jean Dament 24 September 2009

I found this poem quite lovely, but a bit too long. I think some of the ideas could have been broken up to make more poems. Thanks for sharing your lovely talents. Ravensong

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