Sunday, August 27, 2023

Sunshine Cloud And Midnight Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

As a few moons were walking promptly into the realms of Coon's age,
The artist's impression clouded my ethereal cage.
Sunshine cloud is my virtue; midnight rain is my anthem.
I want to reminisce each day vehemently; I don't want to be the victim.
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Julrick Verallo 28 August 2023

'Hot summer is my blanket; cold winter is my pillow.' this is so catchyyyyyyyyy

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S S 28 August 2023

this line is so true 'Anxiety comforts like a friend with a hoax facade' thanks for elaborating this theme

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S December 28 August 2023

a solid and well-deserved to be rated 5

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Acir Eryat 28 August 2023

The lines are getting better and better, this line though 'Sunshine cloud is my virtue; midnight rain is my anthem.' It stuck and i love it

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CJ DG 28 August 2023

this sums up everything, I so love it!

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M H 28 August 2023

the title is so captivating, if you read the whole poem, it makes sense. a perfect 5.

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