Saturday, October 12, 2013

Sunshine And Rain Comments

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What's the sense in loving you? The amount that I do?
I'll cry to you upon my knees, I can't get further down.
when my heart aches to be free, of these feelings, this is true.
Tell me what you want from me, that I don't already do.
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Lilyann Monahan
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Roseann Shawiak 13 October 2013

Very intense poem, I can feel the emotion, pain, anger and need for love. Heartache is difficult to talk about, writing it out seems to help, doesn't it? Also write it out. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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