Sunday, October 2, 2016

Sunshine After Rain Comments

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It is not always sorrow and pain;
Soon there will be gladness and light.
After the long gloomy days of rain,
The sun shines bright.
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Tan Pratonix
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Hazel Durham 26 June 2017

Perfect and superb write, love the title and the beautiful rhythm and flow, sunshine after rain is nature smiling back at us! If wonder could you read and comment on my new poem 'Wild Horses' many thanks.

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Katherine Pinero 03 December 2016

Wow it's such a nice poem, sunshine after the rain, It's like saying there's always hope despite of the hard circumstances Thank you for sharing :)

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Tom Billsborough 30 November 2016

I love the image created. Sunshine after rain and that feeling of freshness and renewal. A very good poem, Tan

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Michael Walker 10 October 2016

It is good to remember that 'the sun shines above'-eventually. M.Walker.

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Raymond Farrell 03 October 2016

It is well to keep things in context and this poem expresses that well.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 October 2016

With sorrow and pain! Thanks for sharing.

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