Tuesday, July 10, 2007

Sunshine Comments

Rating: 5.0

An angel walked in.
Like sunshine,
on a warm summer day.
You cast your beauty'
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Tygrr Robertson
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Jack Tex 14 July 2007

I think you're writing in a realistic way, I wouldn't say idealistic, though it may seem so. The thing is you express yourself so beautifully but as a little hint, you shouldn't worry too much about keeping the rhyme, sometimes it goes bye-bye and there ain't nothing you can do about it. On balance, you rock! All the best Mohammad

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Tygrr Robertson

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