I think you're writing in a realistic way, I wouldn't say idealistic, though it may seem so. The thing is you express yourself so beautifully but as a little hint, you shouldn't worry too much about keeping the rhyme, sometimes it goes bye-bye and there ain't nothing you can do about it. On balance, you rock!
All the best
Mohammad
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I think you're writing in a realistic way, I wouldn't say idealistic, though it may seem so. The thing is you express yourself so beautifully but as a little hint, you shouldn't worry too much about keeping the rhyme, sometimes it goes bye-bye and there ain't nothing you can do about it. On balance, you rock! All the best Mohammad