Monday, September 7, 2015

Sunshine Comments

Rating: 5.0

Through the window the land spreads out before my eyes,
Overlooking is hazy, watery duck egg blue skies,
In our kitchen on the table there is cooling cherry topped pies,
My husband is playing the piano, soulful tunes that makes me cry,
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Dr Antony Theodore 14 July 2018

I was always smiling, laughing like jumping with joy on a trampoline, I was a heartbeat so keen, With my innocent blue eyes that had danced with zest, self reflection..... i am a butterfly. my Mum gave me the strength........... b eautiful poem of love, relationship and zest for life........ thank u dear Hazel.. poetess. tony

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Mihaela Pirjol 06 July 2017

This poem is written with such warmth and gentle sentiments, as only the innocence and beauty of childhood memories can deeply touch one's heart. Harmonious imagery envelop the poem in a sweet nostalgia. A lovely tribute to your mother.

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Elisabeth Wingle 21 January 2016

I have only been on here for six months, in that time I have noticed that all my favorite poets, have written a q about their mother. The love between mother and child is immeasurable. This relationship is our basis for everything we do and even what we don't do.Even in death they speak to us, guide us and comfort us. How lucky is the child, who has a mother. Sorry for the lengthy comment. Hazel, loved your write, beautiful!

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Pietro 6 10 January 2016

Lovely, charming, but made me sad, because it reminded me of my mother.Thanks for the senzation. And it shows the strenght of music to remind the past

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M Asim Nehal 13 October 2015

Awesome tribute to Great Mother......left me speechlessssssssss.

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Rachel Butler 17 September 2015

A special Mother, daughter relationship. A shared blessing your words. Her gentleness is now able to reach out to the many.

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Kelly Kurt 10 September 2015

What a magnificent piece of writing, Hazel. Thank you for sharing

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Akhtar Jawad 10 September 2015

Usually the poets compare a father with the sun, but the poetess sees a sun in her mother. Sun that lightens the way and is essential for the life. This shows how important her mother was for her. Now she is no more. But the every day reminds her the warmth of her mother. Music adds fuel to the fire of human sentiments and so did her husband playing a tune on the piano. An impressive poem is it.........................10

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Valsa George 09 September 2015

There is none who can replace a mother! Her love is infinite! As you believe, she must be raining down radiance from above to light your paths! I can see a beautiful mother- daughter relationship in every line of this poem! Enjoyed this great tribute to your mother, Hazel!

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David Wood 08 September 2015

Our mothers always hold a special place in our hearts. A delightful read

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