Wednesday, February 23, 2011

Sunsets At Manila Bay Comments

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Another day is passed but smiles are on our faces,
Knowing that it is not yet over under the sky.
For we know that the rays of light are in all places
Even though my eyes proved the evening tide has drawn nigh.
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Obed dela Cruz
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 23 February 2011

Dear friend, this one is really quite mature, I mean mature in terms of imagery and remarkable style. You have painted the beauty of Manila Bay very artistically. Very beautiful and delightful write indeed. I have composed very easy haiku poems on p.2. Please read them and express yourself.

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Obed dela Cruz

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