Sunset Rain Comments

Singing me to sleep..... thanks for sharing.....

Ron, although your comma usage is disconcerting, I like the images in the last two stanzas. If you'd immerse yourself in some good contemporary poetry, you'd improve as a poet. That is, if improvement is your goal. If you'd like, check out my new webpage: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know what you think of it. Yrs, JC