Sunset Over City Street Comments
Time of sunset has arrived, sun smiles,
Like an old man smiles without teeth,
As like as from edentulous mouth,
Words come unclear we feel of course.
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Fall of sun below horizon elevates beauty, senses and mood of all souls living in this planet of earth where in succession comes wonders after wonders with which we are struck but can't tell why.........Kumarmaniji........ so beautifully composed and snap taken........thanks for sharing........10
Beautiful sunset sparkling in everyones life. Wonderful lines...While dusk will ring the bell of darkness.
Like an old man smiles without teeth, wonderful imagery is seen here, thanks for sharing, sir
Ive been reading your poems for quite long according to my memory hahahaha but i think when i read this it feels and sounds like, it almost a colour of different tones, i mean it still you but the piece has another tone that i never really realize before. i found it has deeper nostalgic moments, i dont know how to explain how i feel about it. I enjoy giggle a bit at first stanza. wonderful
Calmness is sprinkled with gentle rays, But still golden crown of victory is shining.............. Arresting lines! A spell binding scene is depicted in a masterly beautiful way! A 10
Time of sunset has arrived, sun smiles, Like an old man smiles without teeth, As like as from edentulous mouth, Words come unclear we feel of course. Edentulous has sun become for setting, But golden power has not yet fade again, Calmness is sprinkled with gentle rays, But still golden crown of victory is shining.- -What a lovely picture of sunset and what a metaphor! !
A lovely description of sunset and a serene mood, complete beautifully the day and the poem.
An interesting piece about nature, a city and its people. Nicely presented.
Time of sunset has arrived, sun smiles, Like an old man smiles without teeth, Beautiful comparison sir, loved the initial lines so much. You have shown multiple dimensions of the Sun and His shades on human mind so nicely. Thanks my revered Sir for the sharing. Subhas
A nice poetic image, Mahakul sir. Nature's beauty is very attractive alongwith the animated images of train and human beings. Thanks for sharing.
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7/29/2025 2:08:50 AM # 1.0.0
Street lights are standing to taller to glow, While dusk will ring the bell of darkness, Trees are saying goodbye to sun and praying, Sunset has created beauty in this lovely cit...horrible poetic expression.