Thursday, February 26, 2009

Sunset Of Today Comments

Rating: 5.0

He's standing on the shore
Waves lapping at his feet
She's holding his hand
with a gentle squeeze
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Ria Villaflor
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Enjoy the timeless treasure of the moment.Very nice solid piece-did she say 'yes'? Another ten.

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Reshma Ramesh 26 February 2009

loved it......the concept of togetherness....with today, yesterday and tom..well penned

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Sandra Martyres 26 February 2009

A lovely poem Ria very relevant to our times...enjoy today, yesterday does not matter any more and tomorrow is another day.....

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