Friday, March 9, 2018

Sunset In Sand Hill Comments

Rating: 5.0

Loose and granular appearance we see,
Particles of sand together have formed hill,
Gaining power from early sun in motion,
Now this hill says goodbye to today's sun.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Robert Murray Smith 09 July 2018

An imaginative poem- - - 10

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 April 2018

Sand hill swings and dances! ! Facing the ways of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 21 March 2018

Sunset has written its last dream on hilltop, Ridges of sand crown still sing about victory, Wow Sir what a piece of work! I love the rhythm of this poem so much. It is closest to my heart. I also reside by a small hillock. I gaze Sunrises and Sunsets from its peak. Felt like I am with you atop. 10++++++++++ Subhas

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Muzahidul Reza 17 March 2018

Wow! Wonderful poem presents excellent sunset but picture does not adjust as setting sun is always reddish and yours one is white, anyway, the poem is greatly pennned, thanks for sharing the poem with us,10

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Savita Tyagi 17 March 2018

Your poetic heart and vision sees and creates beauty of unmatched quality from Nature’s simple surroundings. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.

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Valsa George 12 March 2018

A beautiful poem on sand dunes! They drift and change shape according to the force and direction of the wind! A lovely write with arresting images!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 March 2018

Sand hill swings and dances as spring wind blows...fascinating expression! A beautiful poem! Thanks dear sir for sharing....10

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Rebecca Navarre 10 March 2018

With Ever Such Beauty And Inspiration This Enlightens Souls And Moves The Heart! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Kostas Lagos 10 March 2018

This is a wonderful poem.Loved the use of the sand hill image.

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Susan Williams 10 March 2018

Loved riding up and down sand hills to tire out an ornery horse. And enjoy the patterns of ripples that wind had drifted the sand into- -until my horse and I plowed through the middle. Excellent word choices every where in this lovely write.And I would love to write a line as fantastically perfect as- - ] Sunset has written its last dream on hilltop.10+++++++++++

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Nudershada Cabanes 09 March 2018

A truly captivating poem Sir Kumar. Nature shares a bond that only they know in the cycle of life.10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 March 2018

An amazing poem that captures the beauty and wonders of nature. A thought provoking write. When the piece ventured on the aspects of love. emotion, joys and dreams, this nature.write comes alive. Beautifully crafted well executed write.10

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Rini Shibu 09 March 2018

Beautifully penned last few drops of emotions, union and separation of love at the time of dusk..10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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