Thursday, January 29, 2009

Sunset From The Moving Train Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I see the sunset from this moving train
Which decorated by the pretty fine rain
I remember you as my sun brighten my day
With your shiny smile shining my way
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Little Red Apple
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Kesav Easwaran 14 April 2009

a dawn dear to heart is always there after every sunset...bright words filled with hopes expectations and love...good write, Little...10

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very sweet, the imagery was very good you can just picture the scenario of the train moving away from the sun, to remind of the bright essence of a friendship and the memories shared, very nice

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 February 2009

This is love that ends with a big bang! ! !

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premji premji 31 January 2009

these lines are painfully dear to me.........

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Jathin Aka Jesuzz 31 January 2009

lovely visualisations...a painting wit words

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Joseph Poewhit 30 January 2009

Something about trains, stations and romance? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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Fiona Davidson 30 January 2009

Beautiful images you have here...thank you..

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Brianna Trombley 29 January 2009

wow this is a wonderful poem, probably one of my favorites, great write

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