When I see the sunset from this moving train
Which decorated by the pretty fine rain
I remember you as my sun brighten my day
With your shiny smile shining my way
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very sweet, the imagery was very good you can just picture the scenario of the train moving away from the sun, to remind of the bright essence of a friendship and the memories shared, very nice
Something about trains, stations and romance? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
wow this is a wonderful poem, probably one of my favorites, great write
a dawn dear to heart is always there after every sunset...bright words filled with hopes expectations and love...good write, Little...10