Tuesday, June 11, 2019

Sunset Clouds Comments

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I owe this passion to the sunset clouds
Those little moles on the sky's pretty face
I owe them a song, a smile, some molds
Of feelings upon me they used to grace
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Hassan Jalal Weshah
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Jazib Kamalvi 13 June 2019

such a nice start, Hassan Jalal. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks

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Abdullah Alqudari 12 June 2019

The poem is very interesting as it is the reflections of true feelings in the life of the poet

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Chinedu Dike 11 June 2019

An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Jalal.

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Hassan Jalal 12 June 2019

Thanks a lot. You can get this poem and many other poems in my book " The Hymns of the Last Twilight" on amazon.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 June 2019

HELLLOOOOOOO O NEW GR8 POET READ U U HAVE COME AFTER A LONG TYME NOW READ MY POEM MOMS SMILES AND THIS ONE STARLESS NIGHT Starless Sky - Poem by me poet yeps poet Woh raat kahan jisss mein tare naheen woh poetry kya jiss koe pad kar hazaaron mareai heee naheen yehi hai poet kee zindagi tuuu hoe ya na hoe rahengay poets sirf hummm heee Do continue to read us kabhee bhee

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