Friday, May 13, 2011

Sunset Blues Comments

Rating: 4.4

It's been a long time
before i step to this land again
But tonight I'm home
Where each edge keeps history
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Unwritten Soul
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Mj Lemon 04 June 2017

The title alone is haunting....and the work hints at just that perfect, last moment of sadness. Well done, Soul.

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Rebecca Navarre 10 November 2016

Really Beautifully Done! ! ! Beautiful Heart Warming Thoughts! ! ! Another Wonderful Write! ! ! Thank You So For Sharing! ! ! I Agree With Christopher! Love Your Imagination! ! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 May 2016

Slowly my eyes closed. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Christopher Tye 09 May 2016

Wonderful tittle and a great poem, I just love your sense of imagination.

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Ramesh Rai 09 May 2016

I looked into your eyes You looked unto me We shared our dreams Sometimes we share silent scream You want to make a tall tower I said i will watch you at this river Big but something not seen. Simply I can say beautiful and outstanding. Certainly you are deserving much.

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Miroslava Odalovic 13 May 2011

It's beautiful Soul :) , really encouraging, thanks for writing this. Love, Miroslava.

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