Spreading red sunsets assault naked eyes.
Carving raw seams into gashing lines
They cut deep bleeding swathes through dusky skies
While forecasting weather as fine
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Fay, I love sunrises and sunsets and yours are full of beauty, which makes me full of love for what I've read. Love Bobx 10++
Twilight! the half light of day , those long summer nights oh! how we would play coming home dirty, tired little boys from out of the medows i remember the joys no twilight here in the antipodes! i miss it
Your sunset poem is warming to the soul. The room in which I write is flooded by the western light in the evenings and I am always mesmerized by it. I believe we are kindred spirits. Love, SandraX
You have painted a beautiful picture of sunset with words Fay...10+++
Beautiful sunset, captured so beautifully by you Fay... Andy 10
I don't think that there are many of us who wouldn't delight in a beautiful sunset. Your poetry brings it to life. You don't get many beautiful sunsets in the lovely county of Merseyside. Someone would probably pinch them. Best Steve