Monday, December 30, 2019

Sunset At Noonday Comments

Rating: 5.0

One thing led to another
This is not just a regular line
Only legends can understand
The kissing led to the unhooking
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Raimi Babatunde
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Uche Nwanze 31 December 2019

Explosive, narrative, , the use of words, ' one thing led to another'. And the part where you said, 'then I died', you nailed it. Thumbs up. Please find time to read my poems, Ambiguous, Sweet potato, Black belle, One more day et al.

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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 30 December 2019

splendid love...................10++

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