Sunset Comments

Wonderful descriptive poem about sunset, well done 10 Lynda xx

Are you an alchemist? This is truly stunning. What a gem.

This was so beautiful, i loved it sooo much! You are very talented and I hope you continue writing. H&K's Jessica (:

beautiful write. you have natural talent.

Really lovely. It flows naturally and well and you have got some fine imagery there.

Absolutely stunning Paige - you have a natural gift and I will def. read more. Thank you so much - Cindy

Paige in concert with your flowing style and metaphorical application, , , , really powerful almost giving it a Biblical propensity....of course being old school I don't rant on about rhyme and meter as much as I used to, and in this case had I experienced it along with your presentation, , , , it would have been more than I could bear

Fine use of metaphors Paige. Great descriptions indeed. Mark

THATS DEEP! LOL UR REALLY GOOD!

Fine word painting. You planted a garden of sumptuous images and its joyous blooms are delights to the souls of the readers.

That's beautiful, Paige. You've got some talent at a very young age. Good for you! Another '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

Not bad at all. Your vision of nature is much like Wordsworth. More abstraction would set it off as a very good poem. Some alliteration would make it flow. You, my friend, show potenial as a really good poet. Keep on trucking. Jimmer

Paige, wonderful imagery of a sunset in all its glory lovingly displayed here. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. Hugs David

I really like this poem paige, geat flow. well done. Kind regards Ann

Paige I really enjoyed this poem and should there be any way that all the metric verses were as powerful as the first four I couldn't have endured the beauty